Monday, February 28, 2011

Writing Religiously: Most Underrated Book – Many Dimensions

My pick this week for the most underrated book is Many Dimensions by Charles Williams. It’s a heavy read for a novel, and it’s often seen as one of William’s weakest titles, but I continue to find Dimensions engaging. (Before I continue on, I must disclose that some of my comments here come from a now defunct blog. I shouldn’t have to post this disclosure, but after spending nine years in higher education, I have some very warped sensibilities about plagiarism.)

In Many Dimensions a mysterious stone surfaces in England that can transport an individual from one location to another, heal the sick, and travel through time. This “Stone of Solomon” can also be divided infinitely without diminishing the size or quality of the original.

So everyone’s trying to get their hands on them: government officials, airline moguls, hospitals and entire villages! The stone it seems represents the power of God. So when two government-types are trying to avoid distributing this powerful artifact they come up with a plan:


Mr. Garterr Browne smiled slyly. “Ask yourself,” he said, “why people – this
Mayor, for instance – are making such a fuss about the Stone. Why, because they think it does things.”
“So it does,” Lord Birlesmere said.
“Never mind whether it does or not,” Garterr Browne said sharply. “The point is that they believe that it does. Very well. What do we want to do then? Stop them believing it. How do we do that? Tell them, and show them, that it doesn’t.”
“But it does,” Lord Birlesmere said again.
“The first thing I said to myself,” Mr. Garterr Browne went on, “when I realized it, was – people must simply not be allowed to believe in it. The second thing was – thank God it’s stone.”
Lord Birlesmere sat and stared. Mr. Garterr Browne sat and smiled, then he resumed.
“How can one stop them believing in it? As I’ve just said – tell them it doesn’t work; show them it doesn’t work. And if it does, show them something that doesn’t.”

Mr. Garterr Browne had a fake stone that looked similar to the real thing made up, and was able to somewhat successfully dupe people into thinking it was the “Stone of Solomon,” and had no power.

I think this scene is currently playing itself out in our society.

I believe Christianity is true. I think there is a large body of evidence pointing to this conclusion.

In our unbelieving culture (even within churches) there is much doubt to be found, though. I think this has happened partially because of poor theology. Somehow, we’ve come to believe that the “Power of God” in our lives equals “Getting Whatever We Want and Never Suffering.” So as our culture cries at us “it doesn’t work, it doesn’t work, Christianity doesn’t work because you don’t have everything promised to you,” we often throw up our hands and say, “you’re right, it doesn’t!”

What has happened here, though, is we’ve been fed a false power, a false stone if you will. Somewhere along the line, people begin to understand that the power of God is nothing more than a genie in a bottle with the “infinite wish” in play. God’s power doesn’t work like that. He is not a man that I should order him around, and he is not my servant. I am His.

So, we look for the wrong sort of power, find nothing, and begin to doubt God. Instead, we need to understand that we human beings are physically flawed, morally flawed, spiritually flawed, and socially flawed. Yet God, in His infinite love regarded us so much that he lower Himself and took on human form, dying the death of a murder, and defeating the grave through His resurrection. He effects all things to work together to bring His children closer to Himself and further away from our flaws.

I don’t know about you, but I think the greater show of power in life is a reformed alcoholic-absentee father, who now loves his wife and children, rather than a Porsche suddenly appearing in my driveway.

I loved Williams’ story, and I love stories with implications that can inspire thought processes like the one I just shared. Every Williams-reader I talk with discounts Many Dimensions as boring and directionless. William’s magical-realism, coupled with the rare glimpse into post “Great War,” pre-World War II world brings Williams’ book up into my highest regards.

Thursday, February 24, 2011

How I Learned... #6: About Jealousy

Jealousy

OR

The Worst Monsters Have Green Eyes

In reconnecting with a friend from summer writing camp, back in the day, I come to find out that she's been... how shall I put this? Marginally more successful than I've been. She's also working on her MFA, and she's just finished her first novel for an agent.

It's depressing. I feel nothing but good vibes for this person, and I'm thrilled that she's doing better at what she loves than I am... but still.

I was a prolific writer of original fiction when I was in high school. I even had a few pieces published in semi-professional 'zines here and there. I was all geared up for college and excited about learning how to improve my writing and how to maneuver through the ins and outs of the changing publishing industry.

Then I went to SUNY New Paltz.

Don't get me wrong, I loved my college... the lit department, anyway. The creative writing department... not so much. In fact, the concentration nearly killed my desire to write anything but fan fiction, strictly because I knew it couldn't be published and because it gave me pleasure. It took me a good few years to work through all the bullshit I was taught in New Paltz's CW program, and I've only recently returned to serious original work.

In that time, I've become a far better writer than I was in college, and no thanks to the college, either. But that's eight years of business experience wasted, because I didn't get any. I was too busy trying to keep my sanity in the face of out-dated nonsense and infantile discussions of technique. I mean really, did the sophomore, junior and senior-level creative writing courses need to start with the exact same discussion of Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants" that the freshman course started with? And then I was trying to finish college and earn a living and then there was the whole fiancé/husband angle and now he's trying to work and go to school and be chronically ill and, as he's been raging, there just isn't enough time.

Excuse me, I need to go beat a punching bag into a pulp.

Okay, I'm back now.

I'm very content with where I am right now, as a writer. And I'm thrilled that Libby is living the life we all wanted when we were seventeen. I just wish I could be experiencing it as well. I feel like I have a disgusting amount of catch-up work to do.

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Ideas are Everywhere

Judging from authors' FAQs, one of the most common questions people have is where writers get their ideas from. Some readers are just amazed at the ingenuity, and some would-be writers are desperatly searching for something to write about, wondering why they can't find anything.

I never had this question; I always have too much to write about. I'm a little confused by it really, because I think interesting things happen all the time. So I'm going to start an ongoing segment called "Ideas are Everywhere," in which I relate a true event from my life that I think would be good inspiration for a story.

Today's story comes from my time teaching 9th grade. The students were supposed to be working independently when I saw that two of them were making really weird noises. I asked them what on earth they were doing, and they excitedly turned to me and responded:
(xtranormal only allows two characters)









Seriously. Dinosaur sounds. On one had, completely ridiculous and random. On the other hand what sound does a dinosaur make?! We'll never know!





Where do you get ideas from?

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Writing Religiously: Audio Dramas

I finished the first draft of my forthcoming audio drama “Untold Alliances: Those We Serve” yesterday. This will be the second episode in a series of seven. (I still need to send the manuscript to the producer, though!) You can download the first episode for free from the Spirit Blade Underground Alliance.

I’m enjoying writing in the audio drama format. If you’re interested in trying your hand at this genre check out the Audio Market List for a large list of shows accepting submissions. And for help formatting your scripts, check out the free MS Word template here.
           
Keep writing.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

How I Learned... #5: How I Learned to Conquer Writer's Block (in theory, anyway)

Not long ago, I dug up a novel I wrote in my 1st and 2nd years of high school. And... wow.

It's awful.

I mean, I knew it was bad the moment I finished it—I remember that distinctly, and I remember fully intending to go back and rework it into something of marginally less suckitude, but in those days I wasn't a big fan of the whole 'editing' thing. In fact, the idea of rewriting a novel I'd just spent two solid years working on intimidated the hell out of me. And I never did get around to editing it. At some point in college I printed it out so I'd have a hard copy, and I'm very glad I did, because shortly afterward I had a computer burnout that wiped seven years worth of work—my lifetime's work, actually, up to that point.

Also, I guess in 9th grade I didn't really fully comprehend the notions of plagiarism and copyright infringement. The novel in question was basically a name-change of a crossover fan fiction written by a friend with whom I've now long since lost touch (a great pity, she was an immense inspiration in those early days), and whose composite world she had very kindly given me permission to play with and continue… on a strictly fanon basis, mind you.

Over the years, the fan fiction and my work of blatant theft the original novel I'd based on it faded from my thoughts. Recently, though, I revisited those initial pieces of fan fiction, both hers and mine, and decided to rewrite some of my stories strictly for my own pleasure. In doing so, two things happened:

-- my revision of my rather simple and silly piece of fanfic suddenly morphed into a commentary on the supplanting of pagan beliefs by Christianity in 5th century Ireland

-- I remembered that the original author and I had traded several emails about some of her characters, and as I was going to be working with those characters again, I decided to check my files to see if I still had the hard-copies of those emails. I don't, but I found the manuscript of my rip-off novel.

No, you can't see it. It's disjointed, derivative, and full of modern speech patterns... The three best scenes in the whole book are only good because they were written jointly with the original author. I mean, I'm seriously shocked. I remembered some problems with story continuity but I had no idea the dialogue had aged so very, very badly. Also, there are a lot of thinly disguised portraits of high school classmates in that book. Very thinly disguised… it reminds me of an exchange from the MTV show Daria:

Mr. O'Neill: "You could read one of your essays! What about the one about being a big misfit whom everybody hates? The other kids'll really relate to that. I know I do…"
Daria: "I don't know if that's such a good idea. That's the one about comparing the sophomore class to barnyard animals? It names names."
Mr. O'Neill: "Oh yeah…"


Not quite that blatant, but yeah. There are people from high school I haven't thought about in YEARS who were suddenly called to mind when I read that stolen book again.

(By the way, the reason I'm not naming the fandoms or the person in question is because A) I am well-aware now that what I was doing in high school was wrong, and I don't want to profit by it; B) the reason I'm rewriting my own fanfic now is for my own pleasure and edification—editing, I've come to realize, is good for the soul. But fan fiction as a discipline all its own is near and dear to my heart, and I should probably do a ramble about it one of these days.)

The point of this long-winded digression is that I wrote this book in my freshman and sophomore years, and it's really quite bad. I spent most of my junior year avoiding trying to edit the thing. And then in senior year, I wrote "Egg of the Damned," which while not spectacular, has a plot that's at least 90% coherent and possesses an undeniably unique setting and cast of characters.

And the crux of that improvement, I believe, is the fact that the story was conceived while I was visiting Great Britain and Ireland for my 17th birthday. I'd spent two years wandering through a high school trying to write a high fantasy, and all I got out of it was an additional year of just trying to forget the book.

It's amazing what a brief trip abroad can do for one's abilities... what a brief trip anywhere can do for the creative mind. I used to be completely unable to write at home or in my dorm room at school; everything I did was done in longhand in class or in the library. All I did at home was type up what I'd written that day. It's become easier now that I spent most of my time working in an office, but I still carry at least three notebooks wherever I go.

So that's my first, best cure for writer's block: wherever you've been spending most of your time writing, get up and go somewhere else. Down the hall, down the block, across the border or the ocean, just change your location. If nothing else, you'll have something different to stare at while you struggle with your plots.

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Writing Religiously: Universal Language

I’m taking a class on preaching narrative literature. It’s absolutely fascinating. Here’s a couple of gems I’ve treasured from the class so far:

1. “God uses story the most to communicate to us.”
About three-quarters of the Bible is written in the genre of story. Throughout history story has been the best means to communicate concepts in a meaningful and memorable way. This leads me to the next point.

2. “Story is the closest thing to a universal language.”
All cultures have stories. All people are formed by their personal stories. All persons relate to stories.

What does this mean for us writers? It means that more than self-help books, articles on psychology, or dissertations on personal development, our stories have the potential to change lives!

Please write responsibly.
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